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ACT English: Passage Drill 2, Problem 11. Which of the following sentences would make the most effective transition?
In this ACT English passage drill determine if the writer of the passage may or may not have achieved their proposed goal.
ACT English: Passage Drill Drill 3, Problem 2. What would the paragraph lose if the writer omits the underlined phrase?
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ACT English: Passage Drill 2, Problem 8. Which choice best fits at the beginning of the sentence?
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- 00:04
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- 00:08
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How would you correct the following underlined portion from the passage? Does it need correcting?
- 00:31
We know that the writer had to look up information because he or she wasn't familiar with the cat-bathing process.
- 00:38
Choice (A) is incorrect because the use of the word "although" sets up a contrast
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- 00:43
instead of a causality.
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"Although" indicates that something happened
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in spite of something else.
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Choice (C) is incorrect for the same reason. Like "although," the word "while"
- 00:53
sets up a contrast. It would be correct if the sentence were something more like, "While
- 00:57
I didn't know anything about kitty-bathing, I took a shot at it anyway," but that's
- 01:01
not the case here.
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(D) makes the same mistake as its predecessors. The phrase "regardless of the fact" indicates
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a contrast as well. We might say, "Regardless of the fact that I love you, I can't marry
- 01:16
you because of that thing on your face."
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But then we'd be jerks.
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This leaves us with choice (B), the correct answer. The word "since" is used to show
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when one thing is caused by another. Boom. There's the causality we've been looking for.
- 01:39
Seems like this causality came close to causing a casualty.
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