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All right forty essay writing to edit rose frequently insults

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her friends to make herself feel superior In addition she

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dominates most conversations with her own concerns That kind of

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friends would stick around with rose here all rights We're

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going to rewrite this thing to be rose frequently insults

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her friends who make herself feel superior semi colon frank

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What if the next words Well shakespeare wrote that a

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rose by any other name would smell as sweet But

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frankly this rose kind of stinks let's See if we

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can find the best way to complete the rewritten sense

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about this highly narcissistic friend who's just kind of mean

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what the major clue here is the semi colon right

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there which is a signal for us to begin the

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remainder of our rewritten sentence with a conjunctivitis adverb like

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it's conjunctivitis joining and it's an adverb it's like a

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verb Plus since we're accumulating a list of negative characteristics

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that makes further more i mean roughly the same thing

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as and or in addition the best choice so goes

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like rose frequently insults our friends to make her sell

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feel superior Furthermore she dominates most conversations blah blah well

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none the last d right there works with punctuation but

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has the wrong meaning We're not contrasting a positive characteristic

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with a negative one and yet like be points out

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a contrast it doesn't exist We all know rose's pretty

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narcissistic starting independent clauses with coordinating conjunction and is generally

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a no go a cz well so give it up

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