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Learn about effective language use from austronauts that like hoarding moon rocks in this SAT writing drill!
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This SAT Writing videos goes over when to keep or ditch an extra sentence.
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Watch this SAT Reading video to find out more about the job outlook for urban plannters. How riviting.
Transcript
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All right jumpers Next one as an example were two
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in our series of eleven here All right let's go
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back to paragraph and find as an example It's right
- 00:11
there in the third sense as example Planner may examine
- 00:13
proposals for new school I'm sure that will meet the
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needs of changing population grows and changes It becomes popular
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with robots and sandy's planners helping these manage that related
- 00:19
economic social and environmental issues What phrases like for instance
- 00:24
introduce a specific example of something that was just discussed
- 00:28
Usually in the previous sentence for instance is not only
- 00:31
a useful phrase but it's a flexible one too because
- 00:34
it really can go anywhere in the sentence you know
- 00:37
kind of like the cheese it stands alone Put it
- 00:40
after the first comma for instance and the sentences meaning
- 00:43
stays the same So that's our baby d there for
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instance go the loser pile here If you put as
- 00:49
an example a after that same comma well then the
- 00:53
sentence might mean that the planners are examining plans as
- 00:56
if those plans were an example wherever it is in
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the sentence as an example isn't as concise as for
- 01:03
example however an example by itself is an incomplete claws
- 01:07
like be so rid of that What about the example
- 01:10
Well given that maybe grammatically correct but it suggests a
- 01:14
sequence of events like what was given here Where were
- 01:17
we told about the things that go on in same
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city There are urban planners who developed these planes and
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because of that while they examine plans for proposed facilities
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that's not quite the right relationship between sentences so that's 00:01:29.771 --> [endTime] it you know for instance
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