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Okay shmoop er's moving on two of eleven here coming

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next what's the most effective and efficient way of presenting

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information contained in the following sense going on right here

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electrical generation from skin germans delivered more efficient at using

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what killing instead of cooling system because you have a

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cooling enables a further reduction in temperature enabling greater conversion

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efficiency Yeah so yeah it's gotta be c let's think

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about this This is a super long sentence so the

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impulse to break it off is a good one Another

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good impulses to adjust the word order to make the

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sentences meaning clearer and you know use a noun mohr

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specific than using its specific here that we promised as

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his eh this sentence is a run on a super

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confusing run dash on at that Splitting up with commas

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is good and be there but we still need some

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wording adjustments to make it more understandable Remember question here

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asked you for effective and efficient so we've got a

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couple of balls in the air we're juggling Well the

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problem of being not really understandable still exists in the

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final choice D to all those dash is really didn't

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add anything They were just kind of clunky So yeah

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the answer is c put in period and you know 00:01:04.742 --> [endTime] simplify simplify

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