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ACT English 2.11 Passage Drill
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ACT English: Passage Drill 2, Problem 11. Which of the following sentences would make the most effective transition?

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In this ACT English passage drill determine if the writer of the passage may or may not have achieved their proposed goal.

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ACT English: Passage Drill Drill 3, Problem 2. What would the paragraph lose if the writer omits the underlined phrase?

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ACT English: Passage Drill 4, Problem 9. If the writer deleted the underlined segment, what would the sentence lose?

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Here's your Shmoop du jour, brought to you by metal fingers. Great when we want to swiftly

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make fortune cookies, bad when we want a nice massage.

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If the writer were to delete the underlined phrase "fold the cookie in half to trap the

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fortune inside," the sentence would primarily lose:

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And here are the potential answers...

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This one's a no-brainer. All we have to do is read the underlined phrase, remember what

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it says, and match it with an answer choice that says the same basic thing.

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We could do this with our eyes closed.

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Well, that would probably make it hard for us to read, so we'll keep them open.

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Option (A) is a definite no. The underlined phrase says nothing about how fortunes are

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printed.

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It would be cool if an ancient sage wrote them, but we bet they pop out of a printer.

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Choice (B) is incorrect because the speed of the machine isn't mentioned.

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We're guessing it's pretty fast, though. Chances are the Fortune III doesn't give a flip about

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the Slow Food Movement.

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(C) is wrong too; the phase doesn't fill us in on how many fortunes go into a cookie.

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Though...we assume the number is one. Two fortunes seems greedy.

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Looks like (D) wins the day. The underlined phrase describes exactly how the fortunes

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are trapped inside the cookies. This is a detail of how the machines work, so (D) is

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the correct answer.

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We feel bad for the fortunes trapped inside the cookies.

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Thus, we consider it an act of liberation every time we order Chinese.

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