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ACT English: Style Drill 2, Problem 1. What's the best way to make this sentence more concise?
ACT English: Style Drill 2, Problem 5. How would you correct the underlined portion if at all?
ACT English: Style Drill 2, Problem 4. Which choice is the most concise way to properly write the sentence?
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ACT English: Style Drill 1, Problem 2. Which of the choices best matches the tone of the passage?
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- 00:03
Here's your Shmoop du jour, brought to you by the flip-flop.
- 00:07
Good for beachgoers, bad for politicians.
- 00:13
How would you correct the underlined portion below, if at all?
- 00:16
My brother always tries to scare me at Halloween by jumping out of the bushes.
- 00:21
Without a shadow of a doubt, this year would be no different.
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- 00:25
Here are the potential answers...
- 00:31
Here, the first-person point of view and informal language give this passage a casual tone.
- 00:36
The subject matter also makes the whole thing seem relaxed; it's hard to sound super-formal
- 00:40
if we're talking about our brother jumping out of bushes to scare us at Halloween.
- 00:44
My, word!
- 00:45
Anyway, it's like the sentences are wearing shorts and flip-flops, and we've got to
- 00:49
find an answer that's equally as casual.
- 00:52
Both (B) and (C) are definitely not wearing flip-flops.
- 00:54
The words "indubitably" and "incontestable" are about as formal as it gets.
- 00:59
Plunking either of these answer choices into the underlined portion would be like
- 01:03
wearing wingtips on the beach.
- 01:07
The original sentence uses the phrase, without a shadow of a doubt,
- 01:10
which is a fairly well known idiom.
- 01:12
Of course, while it's not totally formal, it's not the sort of thing that people
- 01:17
would say in everyday speech, at least not in the modern era.
- 01:21
It's sort of like somebody going to the beach wearing, one flip-flop and one wingtip.
- 01:25
We're going for the full flip-flop style, here, so we can nix choice (A).
- 01:29
Choice (D) is the right answer because "naturally" is the most casual of the answer choices.
- 01:35
We're actually thinking about trying this one flip-flop, one wingtip style.
- 01:39
We hear it's the hottest new hipster fad.
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