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All right See writing shmoop er's We had a bunch

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of stuff for you to end it We call it

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stuff it's literary stuff Okay well let's just start with

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the first primary dock here which is this fine letter

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to mr nevada which were goingto skin real quick He's

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got a couple of bad up there on the laugh

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of the dress Demons run When we spoke previously you

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said it would resolve the issue quickly Okay so he's

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clearly my strike and then next senses i hope you

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stay true to your word Well we skim down a

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question one we see it's only referring teo Well sentences

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one into so let's just stop right there on our

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skin Go to the question for number one here and

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see what miss mona is so peeved about in context

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which is the best way to revise and combine senses

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one and two All right so there they are Let's

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Think about this well Getting a slam dunk on a

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revised right combined question is hard in this case since

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one is a complex sentence that contains one dependent clause

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right there and one independent claws right there Well sentence

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to is a simple sentence that contains one independent clause

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That's it in order to combine these properly we need

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to follow the rules of the grammar court and then

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we can you know smash with backboard lebron style or

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something like that Well the easiest way to combine these

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two sentences is with a comma and a conjunction word

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like and showing how these two thoughts are connected a

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two points So the answer is c and it should

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read when we spoke previously comma you said you would

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resolve the issue quickly comma and i hope you stay

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true to your word So that's it see and add

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some foot tapping noises in there for the pv definition

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All right what we can't do Yeah what we can't

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do is cost the two sentences together and slap a

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common in between like a would have you d'oh that's

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called the kama slice It's illegal We've missed the basket

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If we do all that if we got the comma

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route while we have to add a conjunction as well

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but we still have to preserve the logic of the

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sentence Okay so placing But as b would have you

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d'oh before that second clause doesn't make any sense And

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keeping the sentence in the correct logical order is also

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a challenge Inserting when you stay true to your word

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a whiny kind of tone there as he would have

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you do well in the beginning of the sentence that

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indicates an improper cause and effect That's it it's c

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We're done with one See you back on the court

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