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Thank you We sneak in and here's your shmoop du

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jour brought to you by electron ix But you're looking

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at this on a computer so well you knew that

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All right check the following passage Lina's Teacher Hidden hazards

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of electronic way we're reading or skinny Fascinating No Ok

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And we're done selina's thesis will be more clearly established

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if she revised his sentence for teo Say what And

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here the potential answers let's kick this off by taking

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another deep lookit sentenced for and senses around it all

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right well the original structure is in great because all

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it says is that electronics create health risks big wood

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What it fails to say is how or what kind

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of risks they create That makes the next sense about

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recycling and seem a little out of place after all

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If electronics are dangerous because they might zap you recycling

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won't help Maybe you'd be better investing in a rubber

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suit if this is your main concern all right choice

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a and b won't work for the same reason Yeah

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we get it Electronics are dangerous but like why Because

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they might gain self awareness and join the robot revolution

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Well the reader might assume anything of salina doesn't specify

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Joyce d tells us that degrading electronics are health risks

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which does tie into the sense about recycle but it

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sounds awkward The following sentence three next choice see is

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the best answer here it links to sentence Three by

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mentioning that the elektronik are for gotten and it connects

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that sentence five by saying that the electron its air

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left to degrade in a landfill So this version of

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the sentence builds the best bridge between three and five

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creating a solid main idea Now excuse us while we

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go Make sure our smartphones haven't become self aware you 00:01:49.141 --> [endTime] laugh But siri has been unusually sassy lately No

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