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Thank you We sneak in and here's your shmoop du

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jour brought to you by the family farm Why did

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the scarecrow win a prize It was outstanding in its

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field All right check the following passes biography of walton

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james Okay jenny wants to add a sentence before sentence

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eight in order to improve the transition into the second

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paragraph which of the following sentences should she add and

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hear the potential answers All right well if we want

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to find a good transition sense then we'd better know

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what its sandwiched between So check out seven here while

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to receive several important medals of honor during world war

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two and he served in the navy from nineteen forty

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one to nineteen forty five and then number eight walter

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married his high school sweetheart My grandmother martha we'll send

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seven is about walter in the war and sends a

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is about him getting his family going So the perfect

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transition sends will take us smoothly from one idea to

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the next Well option a isn't really a transition it's

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just a statement that walter made it home from the

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war which is already kind of obvious since his granddaughter

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exists to write this essay Right Well choice see doesn't

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set us up to talk about family life It makes

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it sound like we're going to talk about how walter

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was changed by the war We're sure the war changed

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walter Plenty but the next car wrapped doesn't dig into

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that He sort of gets is going in the right

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direction Walter did start focusing on family life instead of

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the military but that was because he wasn't in the

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military anymore and like the war was over ultimate lady

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doesn't give us any useful information He is the right

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answer It clearly links the end of the war to

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the beginning of family life for walter so depending on

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how he and martha got along might not have been 00:01:41.005 --> [endTime] different

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