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- 00:00
Sorry And here's your shmoop du jour brought to you
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by lost keys Well it looks like we're not going
- 00:08
anywhere Check the following passage growing up with two brothers
- 00:15
jimmy tinkle like frank But those clues william henry through
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there All right what change needs to be made in
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- 00:26
sentence and here a potential inches right way Go b
- 00:32
well there are three things we can count on in
- 00:35
this life Death taxes and that sentence eight has to
- 00:39
change right there One time he hit my mother's keys
- 00:42
and put notes with clues all around the house so
- 00:45
she would find them Well the decrees the change so
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it must be true Answer D isn't the way to
- 00:51
go though in the original sentence the pronoun them refers
- 00:55
to keys and it's totally right in doing so since
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both pronoun and now our plural the pro known it
- 01:02
is singular So it's not allowed to refer to keys
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on pain of death Well death not today but on
- 01:09
pain of being wrong and stuff All right like the
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option b is just trying to make sense worse some
- 01:15
kind of conspiracy don't think we don't know what's going
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on here people problem with option b is that it
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tries to change the verb hid which is in the
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simple past tense into had hidden which is in the
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past perfect all the other verbs in the sentence or
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in the simple past though so this is a terrible
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idea Joyce is getting warmer but that doesn't make it
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right Putting an apostrophe after mother's makes it plural possessive
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meaning that John had more than 1 mother who was
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looking for the keys Option c looks a lot better
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Putting an apostrophe after the r makes mother singular and
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possessive of the keys This is definitely the right answer
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but jimmy needs to stop hiding the keys So much 00:01:57.668 --> [endTime] for the day of the party
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