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Texas EOC English 1: 1.2 Editing 189 Views
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Texas EOC English 1: Editing Drill 1, Problem 2
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- 00:00
Sorry And here's your shmoop toos your brought to you
- 00:05
by classical paintings bringing you tasteful nudity for thousands of
- 00:09
years That all right check the following past age again
- 00:15
This is our teacher for skimming Entire skimming was getting
- 00:24
this We're gonna finish that We're done all right What
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- 00:29
change needs to be made to sentence too And here
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the potential answers Comet Okay so let's take a look
- 00:38
at sentence number two to see how we can help
- 00:40
you Least in other words the painting more or less
- 00:44
looks like what it is representing huh Well isn't us
- 00:48
Or is this girl kind of demanding Well just reading
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through sense too It's Obvious Something is off so let's
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Go ahead and scratch choice d off list and we'll
- 00:57
do it fast before at least get snippy Eliminate option
- 01:00
b changing looks to look It will only make this
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sentence worse Looks is a singular verb that goes along
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with singular noun painting Look is a floor over so
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it and painting just get along fisticuffs Option c is
- 01:18
also a no go Looks as a present transfer is
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a present transfers So why would release randomly use represented
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past him huh All right Well the correct answer is
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egg in other words is an introductory klaus When these
- 01:35
types of clauses kick off a sentence they should be
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separated from the rest of the sentence by a comma
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Don't worry This kind of introductory klaus is way less
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stressful than the other kind That awkward moment when we 00:01:46.688 --> [endTime] have to meet our partner's parents now
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