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Thank you We sneak in and here's your smoke du
- 00:05
jour Brought to you by dioxins when toxic chemicals contaminate
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the herd's water supply These bloodthirsty mutant oxen are born
- 00:14
all right we're reading were skimming where the awning you
- 00:17
are fascinated by this awesome paragraph it's just simulating we're
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- 00:22
done Yeah yeah okay We're not all right Which of
- 00:24
these revisions would make the paper mohr effective and hear
- 00:28
the potential answers So we've got to give this essay
- 00:32
some advice on how to improve itself Since when are
- 00:37
we qualified to be motivational speakers Went well that's Okay
- 00:40
it's not like most motivational speakers have sterling qualifications Either
- 00:44
option a is the first to go the papers about
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the harm that toxic chemicals from elektronik can cause if
- 00:49
they're left in landfills So it's safe to say paragraph
- 00:52
two which focuses on the chemicals president electronics and how
- 00:56
they impact the environment is relevant to the essay team
- 01:02
so the paragraph stays But this answer option has two
- 01:05
d'oh option c also gives the essay some poor advice
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There's no need to switch the order of paragraphs two
- 01:12
and three unless we think it's funny that purposely confuse
- 01:15
our readers as it is the flow from paragraph paragraph
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is just fine Option d isn't totally terrible advice Not
- 01:24
that we wouldn't like to know if our lunch was
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harboring dioxins and those things but it's hard to see
- 01:30
where a sense that focuses on dioxin contaminated food would
- 01:34
fit in the essay And anyway there are definitely more
- 01:37
significant ways this paper can step up its game The
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correct answer is b The main subject of the essay
- 01:44
is the harm Toxic chemicals from elektronik scan cause if
- 01:47
left in landfills Favorite tells us a lot about how
- 01:51
recycling can help fix the problem but it doesn't talk
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about how the existing damage can be repaired We'd love
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to know so that we can have a dioxin free 00:01:59.679 --> [endTime] experience next time we go dumpster diving
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