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PSAT 1.10 Writing Narrative Walkthrough. How would you change the underlined portion, if at all?
PSAT 1.11 Writing Narrative Walkthrough. How would you change the underlined portion, if at all?
PSAT 1.12 Writing Narrative Walkthrough. How would you change the underlined portion, if at all?
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PSAT 1.9 Writing Narrative Walkthrough. Which choice best matches the tone in the rest of the passage?
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Brought to you by houston They have ninety nine problems
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but a technical fault in one onboard electrical system ain't
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one Wait All right check out this passage Gemini For
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a walk in space I'm walking on sunshine literally take
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a look at the underlined portion below which choice best
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matches the tone in the rest of the passage and
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here the potential answers aren't no change proclaimed well apparently
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this mr white guy saw a ghost at the same
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time he finished his space walk because we can't rightly
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think of any other instance in which someone would have
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a reason to shriek Either that or someone trampled the
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azaleas in his garden for the fourth time this week
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But yeah general astronauts especially aren't in the habit of
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shrieking that's kind of one of the first things they
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teach you at nasa dot com So we're going to
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need to replace this word with a better choice But
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what word should be be proclaimed Ah yes Here ye
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here Ye i has had a greatest adventure on yonder
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planet Now we can just see him holding open the
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scroll there so nah proclaimed is a bit too official
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for this occasion and doesn't really tell us anything about
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mr white's emotional state So we hereby proclaim option b
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wrong with next up D babbled Well sure if you
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were pumped up about something you might be in a
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babbling state of mine like the time santa brought you
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that ten speed bike you wanted and no one could
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get you to shut up about it But does it
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really match the tone of the rest of the passage
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Where has to be more of an emotional connection to
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the experience mr white just had rather than merely indicating
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that while he like to hear the sound of his
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own voice shrieking what else you got Option c gushed
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Well it says sort of the same thing is babbled
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but the word also tells us that he's uber happy
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or thrilled about something and wants to tell everyone all
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about it So like a pipe that's just sprung a
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leak Mr white is unable to keep all that bubbling
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us inside so see it is and we'll shut up 00:02:08.11 --> [endTime] now when we feel like we're babbling
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