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ACT English: Passage Drill Drill 1, Problem 1. Conjunctive Adverbs.
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ACT English: Passage Drill 4, Problem 14. For the sake of logic and coherence in this paragraph, where should sentence 5 be placed?
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- 00:03
Here’s your Shmoop du jour, brought to you by flexible dough.
- 00:07
We once tried to keep up with it in yoga class, and our lower backs have never been the same.
- 00:25
For the sake of logic and coherence of the paragraph, Sentence 5 should be placed where?
- 00:30
And here are the potential answers...
- 00:38
Paragraph 3 gives us a rundown of the entire fortune cookie baking process.
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- 00:43
Sentence 5 explains what happens when a fortune cookie has totally cooled.
- 00:46
Let’s take a quick tour of the possible answers to see which one places this sentence
- 00:50
in the most logical location.
- 00:52
There’s no way (B) is the right answer.
- 00:54
Sentence 1 introduces the idea that we’re about to find out how these gentlemen worked
- 00:58
the miracle of placing fortunes inside fully baked cookies.
- 01:02
Jumping to the end of the baking process with Sentence 5 would be random, especially when
- 01:06
the following sentences detail steps that occur before the cookies cool.
- 01:10
Choice (C) also jumps the gun.
- 01:12
Sentence 3 tells us the content of cookie batter, and Sentence 4 details what happens
- 01:17
during the flexible doughy stage of fortune cookie making.
- 01:21
Option (A) doesn’t work either. Leaving Sentence 5 where it is now is a bad idea.
- 01:25
Sentence 4 is about the flexi dough stage, and Sentence 6 begins by describing how early
- 01:30
fortune cookie makers molded flexi dough.
- 01:33
Choice (D) is the way to go.
- 01:34
The end of Sentence 6 takes us to the cooling phase of the fortune cookie making process,
- 01:39
so it’s logical for the next sentence to describe what a fortune cookie looks like
- 01:43
after it’s cool.
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