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ACT English 1.1 Organization
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ACT English: Organization Drill 1, Problem 1. Which transition works best?

ACT English 1.2 Organization
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ACT English: Organization Drill 1, Problem 2. Picking the right transition word.

ACT English 1.3 Organization
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ACT English: Organization Drill 1, Problem 3. Can you find the correct transition?

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ACT English 4.14 Passage Drill 174 Views


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ACT English: Passage Drill 4, Problem 14. For the sake of logic and coherence in this paragraph, where should sentence 5 be placed?

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00:03

Here’s your Shmoop du jour, brought to you by flexible dough.

00:07

We once tried to keep up with it in yoga class, and our lower backs have never been the same.

00:25

For the sake of logic and coherence of the paragraph, Sentence 5 should be placed where?

00:30

And here are the potential answers...

00:38

Paragraph 3 gives us a rundown of the entire fortune cookie baking process.

00:43

Sentence 5 explains what happens when a fortune cookie has totally cooled.

00:46

Let’s take a quick tour of the possible answers to see which one places this sentence

00:50

in the most logical location.

00:52

There’s no way (B) is the right answer.

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Sentence 1 introduces the idea that we’re about to find out how these gentlemen worked

00:58

the miracle of placing fortunes inside fully baked cookies.

01:02

Jumping to the end of the baking process with Sentence 5 would be random, especially when

01:06

the following sentences detail steps that occur before the cookies cool.

01:10

Choice (C) also jumps the gun.

01:12

Sentence 3 tells us the content of cookie batter, and Sentence 4 details what happens

01:17

during the flexible doughy stage of fortune cookie making.

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Option (A) doesn’t work either. Leaving Sentence 5 where it is now is a bad idea.

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Sentence 4 is about the flexi dough stage, and Sentence 6 begins by describing how early

01:30

fortune cookie makers molded flexi dough.

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Choice (D) is the way to go.

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The end of Sentence 6 takes us to the cooling phase of the fortune cookie making process,

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so it’s logical for the next sentence to describe what a fortune cookie looks like

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after it’s cool.

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