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Okay English eh spiros were on ten of twelve making

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away down the road here on technology forever changing music

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industry question Which of the following would be the most

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logical order of sentences in paragraph for let's go down

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here All right we're going number These are here's one

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In some ways the internet has empowered artists allowing them

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to have more control over their careers are sent to

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However the internet has made it possible for many more

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people to record and promote their music so artists may

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struggle to distinguish themselves from the growing competition Alright then

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since three Instead of depending on record companies to record

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release and promote their music artist can record their own

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music release songs online and promote themselves via social media

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and earn the dollar ninety eight a week that they

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now earn and then sense floor In this regard artists

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have benefited from a revolution in technology that has forever

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changed music industry All right no one's mentioning that big

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album today only gets three million sales and a big

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album in nineteen eighty got like forty million and nobody

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is making any money in the music biz So there

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not much innovation but way wind We die grass here

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So let's think about this What's the right order here

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Well paragraph four discusses the ways in which artists have

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benefited from changes in the music industry and also mentions

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that it may be harder for artists to distinguish themselves

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right so it looks like we're dealing with both pros

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and cons Here's what makes the most sense to group

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the benefits together before mentioning the challenges It's also our

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preferred method to deliver bad news Well since one is

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a good introductory sense because it introduces a general idea

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of a possible benefit for artists But following sense one

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with sentenced for there would be redundant repetitive kind of

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saying the same thing again and again and again because

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they're both speaking generally about the advantages rather than about

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the specifics right then sentenced to goes into the disadvantages

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so it doesn't and followed logically and well So just

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gives us that the most logical order would be one

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than three then four Then too the last sentence of

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the whole shmoop gigi paragraph here would be However the

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internet has made it possible for many more people to

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record promote their music So artist makes roland distinguish themselves

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blah blah blah That's the end of it So the

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answer is d one three four two and yes we're 00:02:23.83 --> [endTime] shmoop

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