A side-by-side translation of Act 5, Scene 6 of Coriolanus from the original Shakespeare into modern English.
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Source: Folger Shakespeare Library | |
Enter Tullus Aufidius, with Attendants. AUFIDIUS The Attendants exit. Enter three or four Conspirators of Aufidius’s faction. Most welcome! 10 FIRST CONSPIRATOR AUFIDIUS Even so SECOND CONSPIRATOR Most noble sir, 15 AUFIDIUS Sir, I cannot tell. THIRD CONSPIRATOR AUFIDIUS I know it, THIRD CONSPIRATOR Sir, his stoutness AUFIDIUS That I would have spoke of. 35 FIRST CONSPIRATOR So he did, my lord. AUFIDIUS There was it Drums and trumpets sounds, with great shouts FIRST CONSPIRATOR SECOND CONSPIRATOR And patient fools, THIRD CONSPIRATOR Therefore at your vantage, AUFIDIUS Say no more. 70 | Meanwhile in Corioles...Tullus Aufidius and a bunch of his Conspirator pals have shown up in Corioles, where people have gathered to welcome Coriolanus as their newest war hero. We guess they forgot that this is the same guy who stomped all over them back in Act 1, scenes 4-5, which earned him the nickname name, "Coriolanus." Aufidius and the Conspirators aren't there to celebrate. They've come to rat out Coriolanus to the Volscian senators for signing a peace treaty with Rome. (FYI--Shakespeare calls the Volscian senators "Lords," so we will too.) We find out that Coriolanus is on his way to the city's marketplace, where he'll have to explain why he showed mercy to the Romans instead of stomping on their necks. Aufidius and the Conspirators chat about their game plan. Since there's no way to know for certain how the Volscian people will react to Coriolanus, they'll just have to play it by ear. |
Enter the Lords of the city. Here come the lords. ALL LORDS AUFIDIUS I have not deserved it. ALL LORDS We have. FIRST LORD And grieve to hear ’t. | The Volscian Lords arrive and they're not happy with Coriolanus. Still, they think he's a hero and are willing to hear him out. |
AUFIDIUS He approaches. You shall hear him. CORIOLANUS He offers the lords a paper. | Now Coriolanus parades in like he's just won the Super Bowl. He's surrounded by cheering crowds who can't get enough of him. |
AUFIDIUS Read it not, noble lords, 100 CORIOLANUS “Traitor”? How now? AUFIDIUS Ay, traitor, Martius. CORIOLANUS Martius? 105 AUFIDIUS CORIOLANUS Hear’st thou, Mars? AUFIDIUS Name not the god, thou boy of tears. 120 CORIOLANUS Ha? AUFIDIUS No more. CORIOLANUS | Aufidius wastes no time going on the attack. He accuses Coriolanus of being a "traitor" and a sissy, which sends the big war hero into ... you guessed it ... a rage. |
FIRST LORD Peace, both, and hear me speak. CORIOLANUS | Coriolanus dares the Volscians to hack him up with their swords. (Hmm. probably not a good idea.) |
AUFIDIUS Why, noble lords, | Aufidius takes the opportunity to remind everyone that Coriolanus is the guy who killed a bunch of their relatives when he made war on their city. |
ALL CONSPIRATORS Let him die for ’t. ALL PEOPLE Tear him to pieces! Do it presently! He SECOND LORD Peace, ho! No outrage! Peace! | Now the common people are all worked up and start yelling about what they want to do to poor ol' C. Meanwhile, the Lords try to make peace. |
CORIOLANUS, drawing his sword O, that I had him, AUFIDIUS Insolent villain! 155 ALL CONSPIRATORS Kill, kill, kill, kill, kill him! Draw the Conspirators, and kills Martius, who falls. | The Conspirators know they've now got the common people on their side. They rush forward and stab Coriolanus—over and over—until he keels over, a la Julius Caesar. Then Aufidius stands on top of the dead body and gloats like a mountain climber who's just summited K-2. |
LORDS Hold, hold, hold, hold! AUFIDIUS FIRST LORD O Tullus! SECOND LORD THIRD LORD AUFIDIUS FIRST LORD Bear from hence his body, 170 SECOND LORD His own impatience | The Lords think this is a major bummer, but they're not about to punish anybody for what's just happened. What's the point, right? People gonna riot. Instead, they decide to honor the fallen hero and order everyone to do the same. |
AUFIDIUS My rage is gone, They exit bearing the body of Martius. | Now Aufidius starts to feel kind of bad about everything and offers to help carry Coriolanus' body to its burial site. Generous! With Coriolanus dead, Aufidius decides that the guy probably deserves a "noble memory," even if he was the man responsible for killing so many Volscian soldiers. |