ShmoopTube

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Thank you We sneak in and here's her shmoop toos

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your brought to you by internet outrage The fuel that

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drives the world wide web along with cat photos first

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read the passage blow from a letter of complaint Connections

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mean cable this morning more than one device on a

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timer Now clint the drop down menu and choose the

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option that correctly completes the sentence The options are Well

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this question much like scrabble is all about word choice

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None of these options air grammatically incorrect but some are

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repetitious lee repetitive and redundant or awkward with phrasing that

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well just isn't the greatest If we consider answer b

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has anyone ever heard event acceptable outrage given that pretty

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much all outrages are unacceptable this wording is needlessly redundant

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Verbose wording unacceptable and intolerable are pretty much synonyms that

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we don't need to have the same thing when just

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one will do Meanwhile something i can't accept isn't exactly

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repetitive Itjust uses more words than necessary so let's try

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to not go overboard with unnecessary parts Answer D unacceptable

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is short clear into the point that being that netgear

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is horrible So now let's send out this letter and

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keep the internets rage engine running and maybe we should 00:01:18.487 --> [endTime] add a cat pic for good measure Yeah

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