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ELA 4: How to Outline an Essay 261 Views
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Can you name the three parts of an essay? Hint: one of them is not "Curly."
Transcript
- 00:13
Starting an essay can be scary. [Guy looks scared sat behind a computer]
- 00:15
That blank white page staring back at you…
- 00:17
intimidating you…
- 00:18
All those letters on the keyboard and so many ways to combine them… [Shaking hands approach a keyboard]
- 00:22
Yeesh…anyone else need to sleep with the lights on tonight…? [Guy looking scared in bed]
Full Transcript
- 00:24
Well, before we flip on the lights and run up our electricity bill, let's take a deep
- 00:29
breath….
- 00:30
And let's crack open our handy dandy outline, which will not only help us write a killer [Guy looks happy and puts his hands up]
- 00:35
essay…
- 00:36
…but it'll keep our electricity bill nice and low. [The lights are turned off]
- 00:38
An outline is basically a blueprint for your essay.
- 00:41
It should give you a sense of what the general structure of the essay will be before you
- 00:45
actually write it.
- 00:46
And no, you can't pass it off to a construction crew after it's done…though that would be [Man handing his outline to a construction worker]
- 00:50
nice.
- 00:51
Anyway, much like an actual essay, the outline has three main parts: the introduction, the
- 00:55
body, and the conclusion.
- 00:57
Let's take a look at each one.
- 00:58
The introduction needs to do a few things.
- 01:00
The biggest one is, y'know, introduce what the essay’s about.
- 01:03
Don't you love it when names make sense?
- 01:05
…Lookin' at you, jumbo shrimp….ain't nothin' jumbo about y'all. [Small looking shrimps on a big tray]
- 01:10
So in your outline, you should write out the main idea of your essay.
- 01:13
Say your topic is elephants and your main idea is that elephants are way smarter than [Person standing on an elephant]
- 01:17
people…
- 01:18
…both those things should be in your outline.
- 01:19
Next comes the body, or as we like to call it, the “bod.” [Teacher holding up a drawing of a 6 pack]
- 01:23
Just kidding.
- 01:24
That’s weird.
- 01:25
Don’t call it that. [Students look grossed out]
- 01:26
Anyway, in both your essay and your outline, the body is the most important part.
- 01:29
It contains all the evidence, information, and arguments you're using to back up your
- 01:33
main idea.
- 01:34
That said, your body shouldn't be one big, flabby paragraph.
- 01:37
In a good essay, all the little ideas that support the main idea will be organized into [Page of continous text is replaced by paragraphed text]
- 01:41
smaller sections of one paragraph each.
- 01:43
Your outline is where you figure out how you’re going to do all of that organizing.
- 01:47
So your essay’s sections might be: elephants have great memories, they can use tools, and
- 01:51
they’re great painters.
- 01:53
Divide those thoughts into their own neat paragraphs and your body has a sweet evidence
- 01:56
six-pack instead of one big, flabby evidence belly. [Drawing of an elephant with a six pack]
- 02:00
Finally, we have our conclusion.
- 02:01
This is the most fun to write… because it’s usually the easiest.
- 02:04
All we have to do is restate the main idea
- 02:07
…and summarize all the points we made in the body.
- 02:08
If you already outlined your essay's body – which we know you did because you’re [Student holding up their outline]
- 02:12
great at following directions - the conclusion is as easy as pie.
- 02:16
And almost as delicious.
- 02:17
And that’s it!
- 02:18
You’re done! [Guy eats ball of paper]
- 02:19
Well, except for the fact that you have to write an entire essay.
- 02:22
But, hey, your outline should make that process a lot less painful. [Girl holding onto a phone]
- 02:25
…Maybe look into hiring a construction crew, though… [Construction worker looks through the window]
- 02:29
You never know…
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